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rewrite-006
medium proofreadcover-letter
The prompt
user
Proofread the text below. Fix spelling, grammar, and punctuation mistakes only. Do not rephrase sentences that are already correct, and keep names, numbers, wording, and layout otherwise the same. Reply with only the corrected text, with no preamble and no list of changes. """ I am writing to apply for the Operations Coordinator position at Brightline Logistics. In my current role at Mesa Freight, I manage scheduling for a fleet of 40 trucks. When I started, delays at the loading dock would effect nearly every route, so I redesigned the dock rotation and reduced late deliveries by 18 percent. I believe my experience would effect real change on you're team, and I would welcome the chance to discuss how my skills fit you're needs. """
What we expected
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}What each model answered
MiMo-V2.6 Distill 9B
✗ fail · score 90 · 3.18 s
I am writing to apply for the Operations Coordinator position at Brightline Logistics. In my current role at Mesa Freight, I manage scheduling for a fleet of 40 trucks. When I started, delays at the loading dock would affect nearly every route, so I redesigned the dock rotation and reduced late deliveries by 18 percent. I believe my experience would affect real change on your team, and I would welcome the chance to discuss how my skills fit your needs.
Scoring detail
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}Ornith-1.5 9B
✗ fail · score 90 · 2.68 s
I am writing to apply for the Operations Coordinator position at Brightline Logistics. In my current role at Mesa Freight, I manage scheduling for a fleet of 40 trucks. When I started, delays at the loading dock would affect nearly every route, so I redesigned the dock rotation and reduced late deliveries by 18 percent. I believe my experience would affect real change on your team, and I would welcome the chance to discuss how my skills fit your needs.
Scoring detail
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}Granite 4.2 8B
✗ fail · score 90 · 2.73 s
I am writing to apply for the Operations Coordinator position at Brightline Logistics. In my current role at Mesa Freight, I manage scheduling for a fleet of 40 trucks. When I started, delays at the loading dock would affect nearly every route, so I redesigned the dock rotation and reduced late deliveries by 18 percent. I believe my experience would affect real change on your team, and I would welcome the chance to discuss how my skills fit your needs.
Scoring detail
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}Spark-X2.5 4B
✗ fail · score 90 · 1.91 s
I am writing to apply for the Operations Coordinator position at Brightline Logistics. In my current role at Mesa Freight, I manage scheduling for a fleet of 40 trucks. When I started, delays at the loading dock would affect nearly every route, so I redesigned the dock rotation and reduced late deliveries by 18 percent. I believe my experience would affect real change on your team, and I would welcome the chance to discuss how my skills fit your needs.
Scoring detail
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}Mellum2.1 12B-A2.5B
✗ fail · score 0 · 1.27 s
I am writing to apply for the Operations Coordinator position at Brightline Logistics. In my current role at Mesa Freight, I manage scheduling for a fleet of 40 trucks. When I started, delays at the loading dock would effect nearly every route, so I redesigned the dock rotation and reduced late deliveries by 18 percent. I believe my experience would effect real change on you're team, and I would welcome the chance to discuss how my skills fit you're needs.
Scoring detail
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}Ling-3.0-tiny (7.9B-A1.3B)
✗ fail · score 90 · 0.95 s
I am writing to apply for the Operations Coordinator position at Brightline Logistics. In my current role at Mesa Freight, I manage scheduling for a fleet of 40 trucks. When I started, delays at the loading dock would affect nearly every route, so I redesigned the dock rotation and reduced late deliveries by 18 percent. I believe my experience would make a real difference on your team, and I would welcome the chance to discuss how my skills fit your needs.
Scoring detail
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}MiniCPM5 2B
✗ fail · score 82 · 1.39 s
I am writing to apply for the Operations Coordinator position at Brightline Logistics. In my current role at Mesa Freight, I manage scheduling for a fleet of 40 trucks. When I started, delays at the loading dock would effect nearly every route, so I redesigned the dock rotation and reduced late deliveries by 18 percent. I believe my experience would effect real change on your team, and I would welcome the chance to discuss how my skills fit your needs.
Scoring detail
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}K2-Horizon 0.9B
✗ fail · score 0 · 0.56 s
I am writing to apply for the Operations Coordinator position at Brightline Logistics. In my current role at Mesa Freight, I manage scheduling for a fleet of 40 trucks. When I started, delays at the loading dock would effect nearly every route, so I redesigned the dock rotation and reduced late deliveries by 18 percent. I believe my experience would effect real change on you're team, and I would welcome the chance to discuss how my skills fit you're needs.
Scoring detail
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