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The prompt

user

Proofread the text below. Fix spelling, grammar, and punctuation mistakes only. Do not rephrase sentences that are already correct, and keep names, numbers, wording, and layout otherwise the same. Reply with only the corrected text, with no preamble and no list of changes.

"""
Excited to share that after five years at Northgate Health, I'm starting a new chapter as a data analyst at Corvid Labs! I'm so grateful to my manager, Teresa Ng, who taught me more then I can say. Me and my team built dashboards that cut report time in half, and I'm proud of what we accomplished. Their are too many people to thank individually, but you know who you are.
"""
What we expected
{
  "type": "proofread",
  "source": "Excited to share that after five years at Northgate Health, I'm starting a new chapter as a data analyst at Corvid Labs! I'm so grateful to my manager, Teresa Ng, who taught me more then I can say. Me and my team built dashboards that cut report time in half, and I'm proud of what we accomplished. Their are too many people to thank individually, but you know who you are.",
  "errors": [
    {
      "wrong": "more then",
      "fixed": [
        "more than"
      ]
    },
    {
      "wrong": "Me and my team built",
      "fixed": [
        "my team and I",
        "I and my team",
        "my team and I have built"
      ]
    },
    {
      "wrong": "Their are",
      "fixed": [
        "There are"
      ]
    }
  ],
  "preserve": [
    "five years",
    "Northgate Health",
    "Corvid Labs",
    "Teresa Ng"
  ],
  "must_keep": [],
  "length_ratio": [
    0.8,
    1.25
  ],
  "reference": "Excited to share that after five years at Northgate Health, I'm starting a new chapter as a data analyst at Corvid Labs! I'm so grateful to my manager, Teresa Ng, who taught me more than I can say. My team and I built dashboards that cut report time in half, and I'm proud of what we accomplished. There are too many people to thank individually, but you know who you are."
}

What each model answered

MiMo-V2.6 Distill 9B

✓ pass · score 100 · 2.96 s

Excited to share that after five years at Northgate Health, I'm starting a new chapter as a data analyst at Corvid Labs! I'm so grateful to my manager, Teresa Ng, who taught me more than I can say. My team and I built dashboards that cut report time in half, and I'm proud of what we accomplished. There are too many people to thank individually, but you know who you are.
Scoring detail
{
  "cleaned_words": 71,
  "similarity_to_source": 0.944,
  "errors": [
    {
      "wrong": "more then",
      "wrong_gone": true,
      "fixed_present": true,
      "score": 1
    },
    {
      "wrong": "Me and my team built",
      "wrong_gone": true,
      "fixed_present": true,
      "score": 1
    },
    {
      "wrong": "Their are",
      "wrong_gone": true,
      "fixed_present": true,
      "score": 1
    }
  ],
  "fidelity": {
    "similarity_to_reference": 1,
    "unknown_words": [],
    "reworded": false,
    "unrequested_edits": []
  },
  "preserve_missing": [],
  "length_ratio": 1,
  "length_bounds": [
    0.8,
    1.25
  ],
  "gate": 1,
  "checks": {
    "errors": 1,
    "fidelity": 1,
    "preserve": 1,
    "length": 1
  }
}

Ornith-1.5 9B

✓ pass · score 100 · 2.42 s

Excited to share that after five years at Northgate Health, I'm starting a new chapter as a data analyst at Corvid Labs! I'm so grateful to my manager, Teresa Ng, who taught me more than I can say. My team and I built dashboards that cut report time in half, and I'm proud of what we accomplished. There are too many people to thank individually, but you know who you are.
Scoring detail
{
  "cleaned_words": 71,
  "similarity_to_source": 0.944,
  "errors": [
    {
      "wrong": "more then",
      "wrong_gone": true,
      "fixed_present": true,
      "score": 1
    },
    {
      "wrong": "Me and my team built",
      "wrong_gone": true,
      "fixed_present": true,
      "score": 1
    },
    {
      "wrong": "Their are",
      "wrong_gone": true,
      "fixed_present": true,
      "score": 1
    }
  ],
  "fidelity": {
    "similarity_to_reference": 1,
    "unknown_words": [],
    "reworded": false,
    "unrequested_edits": []
  },
  "preserve_missing": [],
  "length_ratio": 1,
  "length_bounds": [
    0.8,
    1.25
  ],
  "gate": 1,
  "checks": {
    "errors": 1,
    "fidelity": 1,
    "preserve": 1,
    "length": 1
  }
}

Granite 4.2 8B

✗ fail · score 80 · 2.54 s

Excited to share that after five years at Northgate Health, I'm starting a new chapter as a data analyst at Corvid Labs! I'm so grateful to my manager, Teresa Ng, who taught me more than I can say. Me and my team built dashboards that cut report time in half, and I'm proud of what we accomplished. There are too many people to thank individually, but you know who you are.
Scoring detail
{
  "cleaned_words": 71,
  "similarity_to_source": 0.972,
  "errors": [
    {
      "wrong": "more then",
      "wrong_gone": true,
      "fixed_present": true,
      "score": 1
    },
    {
      "wrong": "Me and my team built",
      "wrong_gone": false,
      "fixed_present": false,
      "score": 0
    },
    {
      "wrong": "Their are",
      "wrong_gone": true,
      "fixed_present": true,
      "score": 1
    }
  ],
  "fidelity": {
    "similarity_to_reference": 0.972,
    "unknown_words": [],
    "reworded": false,
    "unrequested_edits": []
  },
  "preserve_missing": [],
  "length_ratio": 1,
  "length_bounds": [
    0.8,
    1.25
  ],
  "gate": 1,
  "checks": {
    "errors": 0.6667,
    "fidelity": 1,
    "preserve": 1,
    "length": 1
  }
}

Spark-X2.5 4B

✗ fail · score 80 · 1.75 s

Excited to share that after five years at Northgate Health, I'm starting a new chapter as a data analyst at Corvid Labs! I'm so grateful to my manager, Teresa Ng, who taught me more than I can say. Me and my team built dashboards that cut report time in half, and I'm proud of what we accomplished. There are too many people to thank individually, but you know who you are.
Scoring detail
{
  "cleaned_words": 71,
  "similarity_to_source": 0.972,
  "errors": [
    {
      "wrong": "more then",
      "wrong_gone": true,
      "fixed_present": true,
      "score": 1
    },
    {
      "wrong": "Me and my team built",
      "wrong_gone": false,
      "fixed_present": false,
      "score": 0
    },
    {
      "wrong": "Their are",
      "wrong_gone": true,
      "fixed_present": true,
      "score": 1
    }
  ],
  "fidelity": {
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    "unknown_words": [],
    "reworded": false,
    "unrequested_edits": []
  },
  "preserve_missing": [],
  "length_ratio": 1,
  "length_bounds": [
    0.8,
    1.25
  ],
  "gate": 1,
  "checks": {
    "errors": 0.6667,
    "fidelity": 1,
    "preserve": 1,
    "length": 1
  }
}

Mellum2.1 12B-A2.5B

✗ fail · score 0 · 1.18 s

Excited to share that after five years at Northgate Health, I'm starting a new chapter as a data analyst at Corvid Labs! I'm so grateful to my manager, Teresa Ng, who taught me more then I can say. Me and my team built dashboards that cut report time in half, and I'm proud of what we accomplished. Their are too many people to thank individually, but you know who you are.
Scoring detail
{
  "cleaned_words": 71,
  "similarity_to_source": 1,
  "errors": [
    {
      "wrong": "more then",
      "wrong_gone": false,
      "fixed_present": false,
      "score": 0
    },
    {
      "wrong": "Me and my team built",
      "wrong_gone": false,
      "fixed_present": false,
      "score": 0
    },
    {
      "wrong": "Their are",
      "wrong_gone": false,
      "fixed_present": false,
      "score": 0
    }
  ],
  "fidelity": {
    "similarity_to_reference": 0.944,
    "unknown_words": [],
    "reworded": false,
    "unrequested_edits": []
  },
  "preserve_missing": [],
  "length_ratio": 1,
  "length_bounds": [
    0.8,
    1.25
  ],
  "gate": 0,
  "checks": {
    "errors": 0,
    "fidelity": 1,
    "preserve": 1,
    "length": 1
  }
}

Ling-3.0-tiny (7.9B-A1.3B)

✗ fail · score 80 · 0.86 s

Excited to share that after five years at Northgate Health, I'm starting a new chapter as a data analyst at Corvid Labs! I'm so grateful to my manager, Teresa Ng, who taught me more than I can say. Me and my team built dashboards that cut report time in half, and I'm proud of what we accomplished. There are too many people to thank individually, but you know who you are.
Scoring detail
{
  "cleaned_words": 71,
  "similarity_to_source": 0.972,
  "errors": [
    {
      "wrong": "more then",
      "wrong_gone": true,
      "fixed_present": true,
      "score": 1
    },
    {
      "wrong": "Me and my team built",
      "wrong_gone": false,
      "fixed_present": false,
      "score": 0
    },
    {
      "wrong": "Their are",
      "wrong_gone": true,
      "fixed_present": true,
      "score": 1
    }
  ],
  "fidelity": {
    "similarity_to_reference": 0.972,
    "unknown_words": [],
    "reworded": false,
    "unrequested_edits": []
  },
  "preserve_missing": [],
  "length_ratio": 1,
  "length_bounds": [
    0.8,
    1.25
  ],
  "gate": 1,
  "checks": {
    "errors": 0.6667,
    "fidelity": 1,
    "preserve": 1,
    "length": 1
  }
}

MiniCPM5 2B

✗ fail · score 0 · 1.22 s

Excited to share that after five years at Northgate Health, I'm starting a new chapter as a data analyst at Corvid Labs! I'm so grateful to my manager, Teresa Ng, who taught me more then I can say. Me and my team built dashboards that cut report time in half, and I'm proud of what we accomplished. Their are too many people to thank individually, but you know who you are.
Scoring detail
{
  "cleaned_words": 71,
  "similarity_to_source": 1,
  "errors": [
    {
      "wrong": "more then",
      "wrong_gone": false,
      "fixed_present": false,
      "score": 0
    },
    {
      "wrong": "Me and my team built",
      "wrong_gone": false,
      "fixed_present": false,
      "score": 0
    },
    {
      "wrong": "Their are",
      "wrong_gone": false,
      "fixed_present": false,
      "score": 0
    }
  ],
  "fidelity": {
    "similarity_to_reference": 0.944,
    "unknown_words": [],
    "reworded": false,
    "unrequested_edits": []
  },
  "preserve_missing": [],
  "length_ratio": 1,
  "length_bounds": [
    0.8,
    1.25
  ],
  "gate": 0,
  "checks": {
    "errors": 0,
    "fidelity": 1,
    "preserve": 1,
    "length": 1
  }
}

K2-Horizon 0.9B

✗ fail · score 0 · 0.49 s

Excited to share that after five years at Northgate Health, I'm starting a new chapter as a data analyst at Corvid Labs! I'm so grateful to my manager, Teresa Ng, who taught me more then I can say. Me and my team built dashboards that cut report time in half, and I'm proud of what we accomplished. Their are too many people to thank individually, but you know who you are.
Scoring detail
{
  "cleaned_words": 71,
  "similarity_to_source": 1,
  "errors": [
    {
      "wrong": "more then",
      "wrong_gone": false,
      "fixed_present": false,
      "score": 0
    },
    {
      "wrong": "Me and my team built",
      "wrong_gone": false,
      "fixed_present": false,
      "score": 0
    },
    {
      "wrong": "Their are",
      "wrong_gone": false,
      "fixed_present": false,
      "score": 0
    }
  ],
  "fidelity": {
    "similarity_to_reference": 0.944,
    "unknown_words": [],
    "reworded": false,
    "unrequested_edits": []
  },
  "preserve_missing": [],
  "length_ratio": 1,
  "length_bounds": [
    0.8,
    1.25
  ],
  "gate": 0,
  "checks": {
    "errors": 0,
    "fidelity": 1,
    "preserve": 1,
    "length": 1
  }
}

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